You may think its sloppy, but you've provided enough details for our minds to fill the gaps. The atmosphere is all there, and I for one, feels like lying on the couch, facing the window, and chilling out
Some real life metropolis are so bright they emit some kind of golden glow in the night, and this picture gives a nice twist on that fact. I love the lighting effects, and the cozy atmosphere in the foreground. That must be how it feels to escape the fast life of a city.
Angry, and yet glad a domed scifi city has been painted like this. Lol, it always burns when you find an idea has been thought of before, but i suppose it is what you do with that idea, not what it is, entirely.