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I´d also suggest to throw the shield away.
Actually, i really like the legs and the waist, they have interesting shapes and joints. Maybe you could bring in some animal-elements rather than doing humanoid mechas all the time? I´ve also thought about drawing a mecha for some time now, but mine would have these typical animal-legs like from a dog or a bird maybe.
Alos, if the waist wasn´t this thin, it could also be seen as a sci-fi armor instead of a giant mecha. The gun might also look better if hold like the sword, straight like the arm, instead of this angle-position.
It still has a lot of potential in my opinion, just fix one or two things.
I already revised some bits, check it out here:
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much happier with the legs and especially the feet now.
Still need to tackle the upper body and head!
I agree, the gun looks clumsy that way, I need to find a solution there as well...
The feet look great, reminds of how Takeshi Ohbata draws some crazy boots, like [link] and [link]
The real killer is the head though. Keep it like that, i´d piss my pants if something like that comes rushing at me on the battlefield..!
dunno if I can eventually finish this :/
maybe that cleared some things up...?