-I think the composition isn't very strong
-maybe there's a bit too much going on
-lighting could be more interesting
-drawing looks wonky in some places- I can't stand that.
PS 7, 8 hours, no ref.
done for EOW @ Conceptart.org
Only comment would be that the water looks a bit too "flat" I mean with all the explosions and sinking ships there would be more churning water, ripples, splashes etc...
Otherwise I like it a lot!
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I really enjoy this piece kind of reminds me of a ruined pearl harbor. Alot of it is dark and covers the shroud of war well especially with smoke. It really adds alot of character to this piece that makes it more souful and complete as a composition. Good job.
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Only comment would be that the water looks a bit too "flat" I mean with all the explosions and sinking ships there would be more churning water, ripples, splashes etc...
Otherwise I like it a lot!
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Only thing I can think of is that a little reflection of the flames off the surface of the water might ground the effect a little more.
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i like the fogging in the background, as well as the general architecture of the shipyard
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I'll fav this one!
I loved it!
it reminds me pearl harbor
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