The Giant Eastern Land Fish

Hmmm... I think it still can work. To me, it now feels like the scene is meant to be desolate (the empty void sky) but isn't (buildings and lanterns). There's a chance that sticking to one of the two options (adding life to the town and sky or making the town more spooky) would make this piece more powerful. Then again, like others commented: it's fine as it is as well.